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Story postcard – champions in the storm (2)

Simi, her own fears almost forgotten, moves closer to the doors, and peers through their glass. At first she sees no sign of the young man, then suddenly she spots him, bent low into the wind. Curtains of rain sweep around him, hiding him and then exposing him, as he makes his way through the tables to the crate of champagne. By the time he reaches it, he is so low to the ground Simi thinks he must be on his knees.

“He’s got it,” someone shouts.

“Any bets he won’t make it back?” jokes another.

“He better!” shouts Katania, and the room bellies with laughter, until a sudden cry cuts through the noise.

“No way! Look at that.”

Simi cups her hands against the glass, and sees the roof over the walkway begin to lift. She watches it strain at its edges, and then, with a muffled, clattering wrench, one side peels back, twists free and cartwheels out into the darkness towards the pool.

“What’s happened?” voices call.

“The roof over the stairs … far side of the verandah … it’s come off.”

“Where is it?”

“Can’t see.”

“And the champagne?”

Simi refocuses. She tries to find the young man but when the lightning comes again all she sees is the crate, closer now, but without its escort.

“Can you see him?” Simi asks, eyes straining into the dark.

“Yes,” says Marybelle. “He’s just there. Something knocked him over, but he’s up again.”

“I see him,” someone shouts. “He’s on his hands and knees.”

“Agh, we’d better get out there and help him.”

Then Simi spots him. He is trying to stand, but the wind forces him back down, toppling the table beside him and blocking her view. New shoulders squeeze in beside her.

“Where is he? I can’t see him?”

“He’s just behind that table there. Not far … by the crate,” says Marybelle, stepping away from the doors as they slide wide then closed again.

“Who’s gone out now?” a voice at the back calls.

“No clue.”

Simi sees two more bodies double into the storm. Staccatoed by flashes of lightning, they reach the upturned table, and pull it to one side. Then, crouched together around the crate, the three push, bobsleigh, through the deluge. As they get close to the doors, hands reach forward and pull them open and the three stagger in, their shouts spinning into the room.

“Yassus man …”

“That’s wild out there!”

The doors thump closed, and the champagne is lifted high and carried forwards, torchlight bobbing to either side.

“Good job,” shouts Katania, over the cheers and whistles.

Simi turns back to the glass, unable to resist the force of the chaos outside. In the flat bursts of light she watches as the tables, dishevelled in their white cloths, jumble and jam on the verandah like logs across a spillway.

She is immersed in their jigsaw when she hears Rudd shout over the crowd.

 “Listen up please. Has anyone seen Uncle Fred and Bernard?”

Copyright Georgie Knaggs & The Phraser 2023

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Story postcard – champions in the storm (1)

“Come on Simi. We better move. Jambee wants us to go with him. Let’s get inside.”

Simi, happy to stand up, follows Marybelle to Jambee, who is like a breaker in the waves. They reach him, and push on towards the lights shining out from the lounge.

Overhead thunder cracks again, booming over the roar of rain on the roof. Marybelle’s voice, chiming like a bell on a high sea, is the only thing keeping Simi remotely calm. She clings to it as they tumble through the doors. They are barely inside when the lights go out.

Around them the crowd swirls with laughter and storm, as it moves deeper into the room.

“Everyone okay?” Rudd shouts.

“Fine!”

“Yes.”

“Lost my beer.”

“Great. Torches coming round now.”

Bright beams flick on around them, and in their light Simi sees laughing faces, energized by the electricity in the air.

“Are there a lot of storms like this?” she shouts into Marybelle’s ear.

“This time of year, yes. They’re amazing. Do you want to get closer?”

“No. I’m good here. Don’t want to …”

Simi feels Marybelle squeeze past her.

“Come on! This is a proper storm.”

Alarmed, Simi in a flash of torchlight, sees Marybelle’s bright pink top push back through the surge of bodies.

“Marybelle …” she calls out, but the top does not turn. “Marybelle.”

Simi turns around, hoping to see Jambee, but she cannot. With a stab of panic she realises she is alone in the storm-crazed crowd.

“Marybelle …” she calls again. “Marybelle.”

“I’m here.”

Ahead, Simi sees the slight frame of her friend, now half-turned towards her.

“Wait. I’m coming,” she shouts, elbowing her way through to Marybelle, now only feet from the glass doors.

Outside the sky flickers pale, silhouetting the last of the guests to come inside. They stumble in, laughing, and pull the doors closed behind them.

“I love these storms,” says Marybelle. “Can you see? Look over there.”

At first Simi sees nothing through the pouring rain, but in the judder of the next lightning strike, she sees what Marybelle has seen – the shimmering, silver lake that was once the swimming-pool.

“Is that the …? There’s the champagne.”

Simi swings round. Katania is just behind her, glaring out into the storm.

“The champagne’s still out there!” Katania turns back to face the room. “Tonderai! Tonderai!”

“Not seen,” a voice replies.

“They’re at the generator,” Rudd calls.

“There must be someone else. Any staff here?”

 “No.”

“You’re on your own Katania. Are you after a drink?”

Laughter rises briefly.

“It’s the drink I’m worried about. There’s champagne out there.”

“I’ll get it,” replies a male voice.

The room quietens, as a shape shoulders through towards the doors.

“Where is it?” the young man asks, as the crowd begins to follow his path towards the front.

 “There. Just by the corner of the building.”

“I see it,” he says, and pulls open the doors, the rush of wind shoving Marybelle sideways into Simi.

“Shut the doors, man!”

The doors slide shut, and all push forward, straining to catch a glimpse of the champion in the storm.

Copyright Georgie Knaggs & The Phraser 2023

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Story postcard – the drum of thunder (2)

Rudd grins, and waves back as he walks past to check the glass doors off the verandah. He opens them slightly, and has a quick glance around the lounge area.

Quiet in here. And solid. Things turn bad, this is where I’m bringing everyone.

Feeling slightly calmer, he slides the big doors closed. He decides not to go back to the bar again, as he knows the new roof over the dance floor there, will be more hazard than shelter if the wind gets stronger.

He returns to find the guests still eating. As he looks around the tables Simi catches his eye. She looks worried, and he is about to try to signal some encouragement, when Marybelle leans in front of her to speak to Jambee.

She’ll be fine between those two. They’ll take care of her.

Rudd’s eyes move on.

Reckon we can manage this, just so long as it doesn’t turn into Beira.

He tries to map out a just-in-case plan, focusing on the most vulnerable. As he ponders, there is more glass-pinging from the top table, and Tim, urged on by others, gets to his feet.

“Hello … can you …”

His half sentence struggles against the wind, and thunder splits through the hills again. Its boom and echo drowns the words and leaves the fairy lights fainting.

“Speech,” a voice shouts.

“I bless the rains down in Africa … ” another sings out, joined by a rowdy chorus.

The words swell louder, as great barrels of rain tip over the verandah roof.

This is not good. We need to get everyone inside, before the lights go.

Rudd claps his hands.

“Apologies,” he shouts into the wind, “but we’re going to have to move you inside while we clear this …too much rain ….”

Another thunder crash explodes, cutting off his words. It’s closer this time, and in the grey freeze of light that follows Rudd sees bunches of guests getting to their feet, balancing one against the other. They jumble, laughing, towards the glass doors with Marybelle and Simi amongst them. Other guests remain seated, their singing getting louder and louder.

Rudd looks quickly for Fred and Bernard, and catches a brief glimpse of them before a group surges past, blocking his view. He moves quickly, hoping to reach the pair, but they are no longer where he thinks he saw them. As he turns to check behind him, he sees Tonderai and Innocence struggling to lift the cake off its stand, with rain pouring over the gutters beside them. Rudd rushes to help.

Another crack of thunder sounds directly overhead, and great gusts of wind swamp the tables in rain, snuffing out the last of the candles. Around the bar and dance floor the prancing fairylights blink their last. Rudd struggles to keep his feet, blindfolded by pitching dark.

 “Tonderai! Innocence! We need to get inside.”

“Yes … no … safe.”

“… now …”

The replies fracture back, and Rudd can just make out the blurry shapes of the two men, staggering with the cake between them.

 “I’ll get the torches,” he yells. “Can you try the generator?”

Copyright Georgie Knaggs & The Phraser 2023