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Story postcard – the bones of the story (1)

There is no story now, for the wind is back. Rudd looks up at the snap and heave of the roof. He thinks it will hold but he is not sure. Behind him the door bashes frantically against the stove, and in front of him Tonderai stands motionless by the fire, his head turned towards the flames. Rudd looks around the room at the others. Some are relaxed, some buzzing, some quiet – all are tissue-papered in smoke and dark.

He pulls himself a little straighter. His toes, in his soggy shoes, feel warmer now, but his palms still sting from the drag of the stove. He tucks each hand under its opposite elbow, and twists his neck from side to side, wondering how long the storm will keep up its assault.

In the end it is a stretched ten minutes before the wind and the rain shift away like a tide. As the quiet settles, Tonderai begins again.

“Slowly, slowly,” he says, “Girl and Uncle do their work, and slowly, slowly change begins to happen. But at first there is so little to see that nobody sees it. Nobody that is, except Girl.

Every morning, when Girl looks up, she sees there are more faces at the window. She sees that their eyes look past Grandpa and his shirts. Now they try to see beneath his Table, for they hear the cries from below, and even from a distance they can see that the People are tired. Those who look in grow worried. They want to help, to do something. So, on some days, these people, these Watchers, throw in parcels of food, and on other days they reach their hands down to help the People out. This last worries Girl, for every day she sees that more and more of the People try to leave. She knows that soon the only ones left will be those who are not strong enough to leave, and then who will look after those who stay?”

Tonderai starts to pace to and fro, hands clasped behind his back. At first his voice is clear and steady.

“Girl’s heart beats faster. There is no time to waste. They must topple Grandpa from his Table. Uncle must hurry to do his work, and she must keep Snake, and Wife of Snake, under the story spell. So Girl makes her stories grow longer and longer. She fills them with magic and adventures, with Ancestors, and with feasts so big that all may eat and eat … feasts so delicious that she too dreams of their dishes.”

Then Tonderai’s slows his voice, draping sadness over the dark. “Girl’s stories are indeed grand and wonderful, but now fewer come to listen, for many no longer have the strength to do so, and many of those that do have the strength still, are too busy trying to escape.”

Rudd sighs. Too right, he thinks, his mood made darker by the wind as it mourns in through the cracks, searching for what happens next.

 Copyright Georgie Knaggs & The Phraser 2023

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Story postcard – Simi and the story (6)

Tonderai, both hands still cupped together, turns slowly to face each corner of the room. When he speaks each word is gusted loud then soft by the wind.

“Uncle tells the Children about this animal that he has carved, this creature whose shape Knowledge does not recognise. ‘This is Pangolin. On the outside Pangolin’s skin is tough as rock. Not like Crocodile’s, but smoother, like many bottle tops, placed each beside the other.’

The Children listen with big eyes.

‘This skin, Pangolin’s skin,’ says Uncle, ‘is so tough that even Lion cannot crack it with its teeth. And Pangolin has one other trick. What is that? What do you do if you are small, and being chased by something that is big and strong?’

‘Run,’ says Knowledge, jumping on his toes.”

“‘No,’ says Uncle. ‘No. There you are mistaken Knowledge, for Pangolin is not a fast runner. Not like you perhaps. So what must Pangolin do?’

‘I know,’ says Hope shyly. ‘Pangolin must hide in its special skin.’

‘Yes,’ says Uncle. ‘You are right Hope. That is it. Pangolin must stay very, very still until the danger passes, and then, only then, may Pangolin proceed.’

‘Oho,’ say the Children wisely.

‘And,’ says Uncle, ‘there is one other thing. It is not what Pangolin can do, but what others can do for Pangolin. What is that?’

‘Help it,’ says Hope.

‘Of course!’ says Uncle. ‘That is what friends are for, and we can all be friends of Pangolin.’

‘Have you seen Pangolin Uncle?’ asks Knowledge.

‘Yes,’ says Uncle. ‘Once, when I was with my father we saw one, and he told me that to see one in the wild is the greatest gift. And that Pangolin should not be touched, for Pangolin is like a miracle. You see, Pangolin was in Africa before you, before me, before our fathers’ fathers. Too far back to even count. And Pangolin is tougher than Crocodile, and so quiet that you may not hear it coming.’

‘I would hear Pangolin,’ says Knowledge. ‘I would.’

‘Hmm,’ says Uncle.

‘Once I think I heard Pangolin but I did not look because I did not want to frighten it.’

‘Ah so,’ says Uncle, and he winks at Knowledge, the orphan child.

Now all the Children nod their heads. They too remember that they might have heard Pangolin. And the more they think about it, the more they are sure that they did, and that even today they might see Pangolin again. So off they tiptoe, eyes wide, ears sharp – listening, listening – to see if today they too might be fortunate. If they too might be friends to Pangolin.”

Tonderai, with a hand now cupped to each ear, begins to tiptoe his gumboots around the firepit, looking this way, and then that. Simi laughs, and hears Marybelle laugh too. Then Tonderai stops his creeping, and stands tall and still, waiting for the laughter to end, before he carries on with his tale.

“Girl laughs. She sees that she is not the only storyteller in the family. And she is happy, for now she knows that Uncle will not be lonely while he does his dangerous work – work so dangerous that if Snake finds out, it will be very bad for Uncle. Girl shivers, and leaves him to his carving.”

Tonderai looks around the room. “This is how the change begins – slowly, slowly, and noticed only by two. One is Uncle, who some do not even see is there, and the other is Girl, who many think is worth nothing for she is only a girl. But this is their mistake … not ours.”

Copyright Georgie Knaggs & The Phraser 2023

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Story postcard – Simi and the story (5)

Simi looks around the room, wondering if everyone is still awake, or if they are sleeping on the rise and fall of the story. Jacobus’ head is bowed, and does not lift as Tonderai continues.

“Up at the Table all the Favourites are happy for there is quiet below. Even Snake has ceased his whispering, for now he sleeps in the day to be ready for Girl’s stories in the night.

Grandpa too is pleased, for there is peace beneath his Table. There is quiet at his feet and there are crowds at his window. The watchers make him very happy. They have come to see me, Grandpa thinks. Always they come. I am great. I am greater even than great.” Tonderai thumps his chest. “Grandpa grows veeery proud. Soon his head is so big, that the window has to be opened even wider, but Girl does not mind for the fresh air is good for them, and besides, she has a hope. Girl hopes that some of those at the window who look in, will see that all is not well, that Grandpa’s feast leaves nothing for those beneath.

Girl hopes too that the fresh air will be good for Uncle, for she knows he works too hard. He is very thin now. She sees this, but the others do not for they barely see Uncle at all. It is only she and the Children who go to him, and they go for he is gentle. He does not talk of soldiers. He does not talk of war. And he does not beat them. Instead he makes them toys from old pieces of wood. And sometimes he will play the mbira for them. Some days Girl goes with the Children when they visit Uncle, for she wants to be sure that they do not bother him too much, and that they do not see or talk about his work. When she goes, Girl sees that the Children play, that they notice nothing, and she begins to relax. And then one day she hears this.”

Tonderai pauses, then, with his voice now full of the cheerful curiosity of a child, he begins again.

“‘Uncle, what is the work you do on the Table?’

Girl gasps, but Uncle is calm. He has thought of this question.

‘Ah …’ he says with a wink to Knowledge the orphan child, whose head is full of questions. ‘Come, come with me, and see what I do.’

Uncle takes Knowledge by the hand, and Girl and all the Children follow him to the Table, and there they see that one of the legs of the Table is very beautiful, for it has animals carved into it. Giraffe, lion, monkey, elephant, and even the little duiker are there.

‘What is this animal?’ asks Knowledge as he traces one finger around a shape he has not seen before.

‘That is Pangolin,’ says Uncle. ‘This animal, Knowledge, is the most ancient of them all. If you find one it will roll into a ball. It will look like this.’”

Tonderai stands silent, his hands cupped together. Simi watches as he looks down, as though searching for something curled in the darkness between his fingers.

Copyright Georgie Knaggs & The Phraser 2023